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Chandrakanth Natekar
Posted: June 4, 20212021-06-04T22:50:54+10:00 2021-06-04T22:50:54+10:00In: SciFi

All prophets organize in Vedic woods when three missing children’s time travel with the legendary Buddha unfolds a tragic battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. Buddha enters the battleground to liberate God, but evil surrenders even before the combat begin.

The Final Destiny – Buddha’s Supernatural Journey Into future

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    1. Jay_Bird Penpusher
      2021-07-01T08:07:20+10:00Added an answer on July 1, 2021 at 8:07 am

      This is a really interesting concept! But it’s hard to follow who the main character is and what their goal is. Is it being told by the perspective of the prophets? The children? Buddha? God?

      Try deciding who the main protagonist is and write it from their perspective adding in what they are specifically trying to do.

      Example (if the children are the main characters)
      3 adventurous children are tasked with assisting the legendary Buddha in a time travelling mission to liberate God from the Devil’s imprisonment.

      I hope this is helpful and keep going with it! 🙂

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      • Chandrakanth Natekar
        2021-07-10T21:36:01+10:00Replied to answer on July 10, 2021 at 9:36 pm

        Please note that I posted a separate updated logline as below:

        Every prophet assembles in Vedic woods when three missing children’s voyage inside the human brain unfolds a stunning battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. A mission begins to liberate God while Buddha emerges as the last resort to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life.

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