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Posted: March 19, 20162016-03-19T19:34:00+10:00 2016-03-19T19:34:00+10:00In: Thriller

An abused-at-home teenagers finds himself in a school for special people and ends up rebelling against an evil authoritative figure to save himself and his friends.

An abused-at-home teenagers finds himself in a school for special people and ends up rebelling against an evil authoritative figure to save himself and his friends.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-03-20T00:01:47+10:00Added an answer on March 20, 2016 at 12:01 am

      I think there’s an interesting story here, but suggest the logline needs to honed to clarify the teenagers ironic predicament.

      My reading of the situation is? an?abused teenager is?enrolled in a therapy program (which might include schooling)? ostensibly designed?to help him recover from domestic abuse. Only to discover that he’s gone from the frying pan to the fire: the man in charge of the?therapy is worse than his old man (and/or woman) at home.? Now he must save himself because he can’t rely on anyone else to come to his rescue.

      fwiw

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    2. Karel Segers Logliner
      2016-03-19T20:50:16+10:00Added an answer on March 19, 2016 at 8:50 pm

      I think you need to include what it is that COMPELS him to rebel, otherwise you may as well just keep a low profile and stick out the school term. People only stick their necks out when it truly counts, when there’s something important at stake, or an opportunity to finally grab what they’ve always wanted.

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