Penpusher
Posted: 2017-05-16T03:50:25+10:00 In:

An aging Krav Maga instructor reluctantly teams up with his estranged bounty hunter daughter to hunt down the man who raped and killed his wife.

An aging Krav Maga instructor reluctantly teams up with his estranged bounty hunter daughter to hunt down the man who raped and killed his wife.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Logliner

      Krav? Maga? It’s karate but you have to identify for the reader what it is.? What’s the risk to the hero? Good start.

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    2. Singularity

      “After his wife is brutally raped an murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks revenge with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter.”

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    3. Logliner

      The above is good. Protag flaw not in, but effective.? Would change the above to: After his wife is brutally raped and murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks redemption with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter.

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