Logliner
Posted: 2017-01-23T03:14:24+10:00 In:

An aging war criminal seeks his redemption by helping a group of troubled misfits whilst trying to survive brutal persecution from someone he wronged in the past.

An aging war criminal seeks his redemption by helping a group of troubled misfits whilst trying to survive brutal persecution from someone he wronged in the past.
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    1. Penpusher

      This remind me of Gran Torino, a movie that I love. I’m posting the logline here, direct from imdb to you see how clear is: “Disgruntled Korean War veteran Walt Kowalski sets out to reform his neighbor, a Hmong teenager who tried to steal Kowalski’s prized possession: a 1972 Gran Torino.” I think you should try to get more specific, show us the particularities of your story, who is the MC, who is after him. I think with more details we can immerse ourselves in history more easily.

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    2. Logliner

      Hi Nbz,

      Thanks for sharing your story logline. The main character is clear in a general sense. He’s an aging war criminal. Maybe you want to get more specific as to what war. Is he a Nazi? or some other war? Is the inciting event that someone that he tortured in the past has suddenly found where he is hiding out? Where is he hiding out? Argentina? Arizona?

      Good luck with the revision.

      Cheers,

      SouthWestSusie

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