Penpusher
Posted: 2020-02-21T06:22:56+10:00 In:

An amnesiac warrior woman with a mysterious, magical tattoo that compels her to do things against her will teams up with a band of eccentric comrades on a quest to uncover the secret of her markings.

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    4 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      The protagonist should be proactive, the maker and mover of her own decisions and destiny — not a puppet of some invisible force, the play thing of someone else’s decisions.

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    2. Penpusher

      The tattoo magically compels the protagonist, under certain circumstances, to perform some acts that are dangerous to herself and to others. She goes on a quest to find out who put the tattoo on her, so she can get them to remove the curse. How does this make her “proactive”?

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    3. Singularity

      >>>How does this maker her “proactive”?

      It doesn’t.

      That’s the problem.

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    4. Penpusher

      You could make her act upon the discovery of what the tattoo makes her do, that would make her proactive?

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