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Posted: 2015-10-29T18:05:02+10:00 In:

An archeologist’s family struggles to stay alive, after a failed expedition in the remote jungles of the Amazon awakens a supposed extinct, cannibalistic humanoid that terrorizes and hunts them, one by one.

An archeologist’s family struggles to stay alive, after a failed expedition in the remote jungles of the Amazon awakens a supposed extinct, cannibalistic humanoid that terrorizes and hunts them, one by one.
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    1. Singularity

      An inciting incident would give the story a starting point and add legitimacy to the creature’s vengeful tendencies.

      E.g:
      After disrupting the tomb of an ancient beast an archaeologist must fight a cannibalistic humanoid to get his family safely out of the Amazon.

      Hope this helps.

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    2. Singularity

      So failure is what it takes to invoke vengeance by a humanoid cannibal??? Sounds like some teachers whose tutelage I had to survive.

      But seriously, the standard mytho-poetic formula is that daemonic forces arise to wreak revenge for failure to respect taboos, failure to avoid trespassing on sacred grounds, failure to respect sacred objects.? I suggest that the definition of the expedition’s failure needs to be refocused and made more specific.

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