Penpusher
Posted: 2019-01-31T11:47:34+10:00 In:

An awkward pre teen girl tries desperatley to survive her middle school years despite the fact that her home life is utterly unstable. She lives in poverty with a drug addicted, bipolar, suicidal mother who continually bounces from husband to husband with no regard for her children.

An awkward pre teen girl tries desperatley to survive her middle school years despite the fact that her home life is utterly unstable. She lives in poverty with a drug addicted, bipolar, suicidal mother who continually bounces from husband to husband with no regard for her children.
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    1. Uberwriter

      Think of the emotional heart of this story and you will be on steady ground. ?You will also be able to write a more concise logline.

      What do you see as the reasons she is desperate to fit in? How will it effect her if she doesn?t? ?You could also link it to an event, unless it is a logline for a series.

      An awkward girl from a horribly dysfunctional family is desperate to find her place in middle school after the only positive thing in her life, her best friend leaves.

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    2. Singularity

      Check out the “Our formula” tab for help with formatting.

      This is currently more of a setup than a logline. This is simply introducing us to the world the story is set in. For it to be a logline we need an inciting incident that sets up an associated goal. ?What is the specific event that turns her life upside down? How is she going to get her life back the right way round? That’s your story and that’s what needs to be in your logline.

      Hope this helps.

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