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jfigPenpusher
Posted: October 31, 20172017-10-31T09:17:35+10:00 2017-10-31T09:17:35+10:00In: Thriller

An established private investigator that unintentionally causes an international disaster by crashing a drone into a flying airliner must decide between turning himself in or covering his tracks and attempting to start a new life.

An established private investigator that unintentionally causes an international disaster by crashing a drone into a flying airliner must decide between turning himself in or covering his tracks and attempting to start a new life.
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    1. Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-10-31T11:47:54+10:00Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 11:47 am

      As a drone flyer, I’m curious as to what choice he makes. Mind divulging? Lol

      But yes, where is the identifying conflict for the audience coming from here?

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-10-31T09:32:32+10:00Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 9:32 am

      >>>must decide between

      Loglines are about plots.? Plots are about what characters do — not decide whether or no to do, but what they actually do.

      So what does the PI do as a result of the of his careless behavior?? And why would an audience sympathize with and want to watch a film about a character who runs away rather than man up?

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