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Posted: November 5, 20192019-11-05T06:43:02+10:00 2019-11-05T06:43:02+10:00In: Drama

An ex-con, defending a reformed paedophile from an angry mob ? begins to doubt the man?s innocence.

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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2019-11-05T18:43:40+10:00Added an answer on November 5, 2019 at 6:43 pm

      We need to understand the ex-con’s motive.

      I wonder if it would be worth, rather than a reformed paedophile, make him a wrongly accused paedophile. Through the events in the film, we can discover that he was actually let off on a technicality or something and the ex-con discovers that perhaps he did do it after all.

      I’m seeing an “Assault on Precinct 13” type film.

      I think you’re right to drop the sister love story. Whilst it’s interesting, I ?don’t think it’s the A-story.

      Can you put this into a more conventional format. Inciting incident, protagonist and goal?

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