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sharkeatingman
Posted: April 10, 20122012-04-10T14:21:04+10:00 2012-04-10T14:21:04+10:00

An ex-con stunt driver is retained by the FBI to drive a witness- the Godfather?s mother- cross country, dodging bullets, corrupt cops, and one very scorned lover.

“Banking on Betty” action/comedy

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    1. sharkeatingman
      2012-04-11T16:08:39+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 4:08 pm

      Thank you, Jennifer. Very kind. Also very perceptive, as your last guess was spot-on. Although the motive is not terribly original, it does seem to work in the story.

      It’s completed, if interested in reading it; I’d be glad to forward. 🙂
      Have a great logline-producing day!

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    2. Jennifer Feuerbach Penpusher
      2012-04-11T13:21:14+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 1:21 pm

      I just love it.

      How is he retained? Blackmailed? Coerced? Tricked? Promised a clean record?

      Anyway it sounds like a really cool script.

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      2012-04-10T20:33:15+10:00Added an answer on April 10, 2012 at 8:33 pm

      Nice!!

      Finally again, a road movie with excitement. Road movies are too often pure inner journeys without much happening. you promise us a great cinematic ride.

      Perhaps it would be good to know what the ex-con’s investment in the story is. What can he get out of it?

      And what will be the characters’ psychological journey? I’m hoping this is a dual journey – both characters learn something from spending time with each other against their will.

      I want to see this.

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