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Posted: October 26, 20172017-10-26T16:55:23+10:00 2017-10-26T16:55:23+10:00In: Drama

An Israeli locksmith entangled in a turf war manipulates Google advertising to build a mobile empire from a call center in his living room.

An Israeli locksmith entangled in a turf war manipulates Google advertising to build a mobile empire from a call center in his living room.
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    1. Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-10-26T23:41:56+10:00Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 11:41 pm

      Agree with Fandango,

      This is missing so much. It is also too small to be a feature film. Why would an audience care if the Israeli locksmith succeeds or not?

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    2. Fandango1980 Logliner
      2017-10-26T22:06:17+10:00Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 10:06 pm

      Hey Ryan,

      Thank you for sharing your logline.
      I miss the stakes in this logline.
      What if Google refuses to build a mobile empire in his living room?

      Thanks,

      Aschwin

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