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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: October 20, 20202020-10-20T02:51:53+10:00 2020-10-20T02:51:53+10:00In: Fantasy

An obnoxious hummingbird and her time-traveling hijinks must learn that her misdeed to others have cataclysmic consequences.

An obnoxious hummingbird and her time-traveling hijinks must learn that her misdeed to others have cataclysmic consequences.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-10-20T07:06:37+10:00Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 7:06 am

      Loglines are about the action in the here and now, in the present tense of the story — not the lesson to be learned… sometime… eventually. Why? Because the struggle stretching out 90-110 minutes is what sells tickets, not the lesson finally learned in a few seconds of insight and recognition in the 90th minute.

      The ongoing action line, not the momentary lesson beat, is what movie producers want to see in a logline.

      And what does the bird want anyway? What is her specific objective goal that generates the hijinks? What is her specific character flaw (in a word or short phrase) that leads to its misdeeds?

      fwiw

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2020-10-20T20:49:32+10:00Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 8:49 pm

      You are far better off using a Butterfly as the lead than a hummingbird.

      When an unassuming Butterfly learns that even her slightest actions may cause overwhelming world catastrophes, She goes out of her way to not change a single thing in her environment, not even a blade of grass.

      Title: The Butterfly Effect

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