Title: Wolfbane
Horror/thriller
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Arthur survives a werewolf attack = great inciting incident.
I’d like to know a bit more about Arthur, his profession, age, and maybe a character flaw? Knowing this might spark an extra bit of interest.
patrockable thankyou for your input.
“Arthur, a 28 year old wildlife enthusiast survives a werewolf attack. With no clue or cure and a new moon rising, the hunter on his tail has all the answers”
Arthur, 28 year old wildlife enthusiast survives a werewolf attack. With no clue or cure and a new moon rising, the hunter on his tail has all the answers.
Also Andrew, you many consider the goal of the main protagonist. And perhaps a little more description on the hunter, I’m not sure if his the antagonist or an ally.
Andrew- the age is irrelevant, unless, of course, it’s relevant. Same with names.
The protag is wildlife enthusiast. How would you describe him, character-wise? Lonely, blind, gay, obsessive-compulsive?
The antag is the hunter. We have no further info on this person/thing.
Goal- Cure his lycanthropy? He had another goal before he was bitten; what was it? If you use irony, it could be to save the grey wolves from extinction or something along those lines.
Stakes- Dying, staying a werewolf…
Inner conflict- wants to save wolves, now has become one?
Outer conflcit- running from “hunter”
Hook- the hunter becomes the hunted?
Genre- horror
Once you answer all of these elements, the logline almost writes itself. Then, by rearranging or replacing words with more colorful, useful descriptive and action words, you should reduce the larger phrases to one or two word phrases, and get the logline to under thirty words- 25 if possible. For example:
“A game warden battling illegal poachers, contracts the werewolf virus, and must now protect the dwindling wolf population, including himself, from a sadistic pelt smuggler.”
(Probably not your story, but…)
Protag- game warden
Antag- sadistic pelt smuggler
Goal- protect himself, protect dwindling wolf population, catch poachers
Inner Conflict- has become a werewolf
Outer Conflict- battles poachers and sadistic pelt smuggler
Irony- once protector of wolves, has now become one.
Hook- werewolf game warden
Genre- horror
Wow! I like it Sharkman. Nice thorough analysis. 🙂
Wow thanks all, will go back and work on it. Cheers.
Still a work in progress.
A passianate wildlife enthusiast chases leads on a series of bizarre animal mutilation, contracts the lycanthropy virus,
He must now find a cure and safety from a group of relentless werewolf hunters.