BEASTS – revised post feedback
As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.
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This probably isn’t a Logline, even though the story sounds super cool.
A Logline tells the basic story in 27 words or less, and is designed to market an idea before a lift goes from one floor to another. ( just in case you bump into Spielberg in the lift)
I know it is very hard to do and I am guilty of going over the 27 word rule many times.
I am sure if you do Logline this right, we’ll be seeing your film reach the top.