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Sonya Kennedy
Posted: April 8, 20152015-04-08T10:07:51+10:00 2015-04-08T10:07:51+10:00In: Public

At a popular theme park a new dancer/actor secretly experiences grief and rivalry from the other females as she tries to fit in, but when employees begin to mysteriously disappear and die, she has to fight to survive and find the killer before she becomes their next victim.

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    1. 2015-04-08T10:55:15+10:00Added an answer on April 8, 2015 at 10:55 am

      I like this concept – I assume it’s a bit of a ‘slashy’ and a theme park has potential to go to town with the scare factor. Perhaps use the term ‘performer’ instead of actor/dancer? A ‘slash’ / in a logline looks jarring, and suggests that you can’t make up your mind?

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