Posted: 2013-12-13T02:14:42+10:00 In:

At the death of their mother three siblings undertake the journey to bury there mother and put her estate in order, but when they meet their long awaited soul mates they must learn that the path of pain leads to hope and joy before they loose this opportunity to the sorrow that engulfs them.

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    1. After mentioning the death of the mother you probably don’t need to mention burying her. if the siblings are 3 sisters mention this. How are they learning the path leads to joy?

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    2. Logliner

      I don’t really know what to make up of this. Have you tried to say this aloud to yourself? Memorize it? Can you imagine you go on a party and speak it aloud to people, asking their opinion? Do you think they will be hooked and they will be interested how three siblings learn something about a path of pain leading towards hope and joy before they loose this opportunity to the sorrow that engulfs them?

      Its very hard to me to see what is the story about, especially, what are the antagonist forces?

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    3. Three siblings embark on a on a journey of pain and self discovery as they bury their mother and set her affairs in order.

      I like the prospects of the story contained in your logline. Self discovery spurred by pain and loss is powerful story fodder as it gives us a chance to glimpse inside our own lives.

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