Oops mum, I Buried the Lead! {Germany’s alt. title: “Richter und Jury”-?A Short by Uwe Boll?} https://redhotwritingtips.wordpress.com/2011/05/02/logline-what-it-is-and-how-to-write-one/#comments
Rutger OosterhoffLogliner
“Spielberg’s and Tarantino’s internet bet: at home at Uwe Boll – concidered Hollywood’s worst movie maker – be the first that writes a killer logline under twenty words; or star in Boll’s next disaster movie.”
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First off you spelled considered wrong. And it’s too wordy, doesn’t flow well. Everyone knows Boll’s films suck so you could probably take that part out.
“Spielberg?s and Tarantino make a bet: write a killer logline under twenty words or star in Uwe Boll?s next disaster movie.”