Chaos ensues when a group of four teenage misfits sign up for a week-long school trip to a sleepy caravan park occupied by monotonous residents and the supernatural.

Hi Sam Garner.

1. Chaos sounds very unspecific here it makes the movie hard to visualise. So does the casual use of monotonous residents and the supernatural. Both don’t make the concept clearer or more appealing, but only more vague. Try to focus in on where the major opposition/conflict will come from in the script. Is there some monster they have to defeat to return alive from their school trip? Are the residents really the problem? What sort of chaos are we talking about exactly?
2. The prime goal of your heroes is missing entirely, which makes this concept unfocused and like it could go anywhere, but nowhere specific.