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WeareherosPenpusher
Posted: May 25, 20202020-05-25T18:45:30+10:00 2020-05-25T18:45:30+10:00In: Superhero

Children taken away from their families and off the street are experimented on to become weapons in a unseen war. Only one, a young girl, survives and becomes a force to be reckoned with.

Children taken away from their families and off the street are experimented on to become weapons in a unseen war. Only one, a young girl, survives and becomes a force to be reckoned with.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2020-05-26T13:44:25+10:00Added an answer on May 26, 2020 at 1:44 pm

      You are missing an important element, the lead character’s goal

      Try re-writing this logline from the lead character’s point of view

      “When she is kidnapped by a secret organization, a local street-girl turned assassin must..” (Then add her goal)

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