Corey Mann a cat suit wearing anime obsessive gives the comic that he wrote to a girl thinking that she will pass it on to the publisher she works for. When he finds his comic in the trash, and he is kicked out of school he questions whether or not his dream of moving to japan is realistic

The logline is too long and cumbersome. You will need to trim and tighten.

“Corey Mann a cat suit wearing anime obsessive”: you need a comma in there. Make sure the grammar is correct or the reader will struggle to get it.

Is the hero too much of an oddball?? How will you make him relatable?

“gives the comic that he wrote to a girl thinking that she will pass it on to the publisher she works for” makes the hero sound naive, which is not good for empathy with the main character.

“When he finds his comic in the trash, and he is kicked out of school”: it is hard to see any connection between these two events, therefor it may confuse the reader. Also, finding the comic book in the trash may simply not be enough of a starter for a big story. Being kicked out of school isn’t, either.

“he questions whether or not his dream of moving to japan is realistic”: again, we don’t see the relationship between the events above and this dream of moving to Japan. Why is this dream so important to him? For this to work, the audience needs to get it – and want it with him.