Penpusher
Posted: 2016-08-23T04:55:44+10:00 In:

David, a young aspiring drummer growing up in the 1980s struggles through the challenges of adolescence and finds that friendship, music, and the human spirit are the mightiest weapons of all.

David, a young aspiring drummer growing up in the 1980s struggles through the challenges of adolescence and finds that friendship, music, and the human spirit are the mightiest weapons of all.
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    1. The mightiest weapons of all… to combat what exactly? What are the “struggles of adolescence”? As the comments above have stated try to be more specific with your loglines because this is an interesting setting.

      Whiplash meets Sing Street maybe?

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    2. Uberwriter

      It could be a great story for a logline, what is the weapons used against, bullying, poverty etc

      Give me that and loglines will just pour out. Plus what triggers everything.

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    3. Singularity

      First of all, there is no need to name the protagonist. ?More important is to include an adjective (or two) indicating his defining characteristic or flaw.

      Second, the purpose of a logline is to define a specific plot for the protagonist. ?”Struggles through the challenges of adolescence” isn’t specific given that ALL teens struggle through the challenges of adolescence. ?What is the specific, unique and compelling challenge and struggle facing this teen?

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