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Posted: August 11, 20212021-08-11T12:02:02+10:00 2021-08-11T12:02:02+10:00In: Thriller

A wounded African American man seeking refuge from BLM riots appears at the door of a rich family. After taking him in, he appears on the news as wanted for murder and the family must decide if he was framed, or face the consequences of harboring a murderer.

A wounded African American man seeking refuge from BLM riots appears at the door of a rich family. After taking him in, he appears on the news as wanted for murder and the family must decide if he was framed, or face the consequences of harboring a murderer.
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      Odie Samurai
      2021-08-17T07:04:43+10:00Added an answer on August 17, 2021 at 7:04 am

      Leaning towards:
      “A comfortable upper-class family must decide [ACTION/GOAL] when a wounded African American BLM protestor seeks refuge.

      Thinking aloud – the “wanted for murder” plot point is good ACT II fodder – when we (audience) have an investment into your premise and these characters.

      Keep going!

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    2. R.C. Penpusher
      2021-08-11T23:08:23+10:00Added an answer on August 11, 2021 at 11:08 pm

      It is too long. Remove the unnecessary words.

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