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Posted: 2017-08-29T20:58:22+10:00 In:

Ex-Priest struggles against the Devil to prevent his just started B&B into a portal to Hell.

Ex-Priest struggles against the Devil to prevent his just started B&B into a portal to Hell.
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    1. Uberwriter

      Fandango,

      This is confusing. Try to assist your writing a bit so that the read flows better.

      An ex-priest battles the Devil in order to prevent his newly formed ?????? into being used as a destructive portal from hell.

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    2. Logliner

      Hey Foxtrot 25,

      Thank you for you comment!
      Can I use Bed & Breakfast in your line?

      To give you a bit of a background on the story.
      Its about a priest that doesn’t believe anymore due to dramatic events and starts a new life by running a Bed and Breakfast
      The first guests arrive and appears to be the devil and his lackeys who wants to turn his B&B into a portal from Hell and start an apocalypse

      I hope to hear you soon!

      Kind Regards,

      Aschwin

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