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jnewbery
Posted: December 6, 20132013-12-06T15:28:52+10:00 2013-12-06T15:28:52+10:00In: Public

Families struggling with the threat of foreclosure are offered sustainable options to stay in their homes when socially-responsible investors crowdfund to buy their mortgages.

Save My Home!

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    1. Louise Weihart Penpusher
      2013-12-06T18:42:10+10:00Added an answer on December 6, 2013 at 6:42 pm

      I think this could make for a very interesting film around housing shortages etc. But, you need to focus it around specific characters. You need a main character who has a goal after something happens to him/her. Is the main character an investor who is maybe touched by a homeless person and then decides to crowdfund. Or is it a once successful homeowner who faced with foreclosure decides to get crowdfunders ….

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    2. imluvdbyjesus
      2013-12-12T10:15:07+10:00Added an answer on December 12, 2013 at 10:15 am

      I agree with Louise Weihart, you need to focus your logline on a main character (your protagonist) and his or her goal(s); but you also need to include the antagonist(opponent) that your main character must overcome to reach that goal.

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