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Posted: 2021-09-17T03:57:13+10:00 In:

Ferocious identical twins Reggie and Ronnie Kray are at the top of London’s criminal underworld. Stopping at nothing to maintain their dominance, establishing themselves as two of the most feared and respected gangsters in London’s history.

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Living the high life in London’s East End during the 50’s and 60’s Reggie and Ronnie are ruthless criminals. Running protection rackets, arson, and murder are daily events. While the battle rages on with the equally brutal Richardson gang of the West End, when the city’s lead detective comes to town, it’s not always clear who wears the white hat.

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    1. Samurai

      Consider the following:
      1. Dig the ferocious duo protags.
      2. A worldbuilder may help as this is a period piece.
      3. Do they start at the top, fall, then return?
      4. As a reader, I know the goal, but not the Major Event – call to action.
      5. From your synopsis the opposition is a rival gang or a detective, this is not referenced in the logline.
      6. Click the Formula link in the header for help.

      Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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