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hapsta
Posted: March 21, 20132013-03-21T10:01:07+10:00 2013-03-21T10:01:07+10:00In: Student Loglines

From professional football player to professional coach he leads the top team to victory and breaks multimillion dollar contracts a long the way.

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    1. Tor Dollhouse
      2013-03-21T20:21:22+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 8:21 pm

      Very vague and more of a tag line than logline.

      Why does he have to win ??
      Whats at stake ??
      Why is he breaking multimillion dollar contracts ??
      What is the protagonists weakness ??
      What obstacles stand in the way of the protagonist ??

      Try to include all the unique factors that make this concept stand out from the crowd..

      Happy writing 😀

      Tor

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    2. efajilan
      2013-03-21T10:19:36+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:19 am

      Sweet! Is there a main obstacle that the main character needs to overcome?

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    3. hapsta
      2013-03-21T10:17:37+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:17 am

      the character is reviled in the movie

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    4. Tim Way
      2013-03-21T10:15:45+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:15 am

      what is the goal of the story? is it to lead the team to victory? it isn’t clear what the stakes that the coach will face

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    5. ktramsay2
      2013-03-21T10:11:04+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:11 am

      Who leads the top team to victory?

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