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From professional football player to professional coach he leads the top team to victory and breaks multimillion dollar contracts a long the way.
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Who leads the top team to victory?
what is the goal of the story? is it to lead the team to victory? it isn’t clear what the stakes that the coach will face
the character is reviled in the movie
Sweet! Is there a main obstacle that the main character needs to overcome?
Very vague and more of a tag line than logline.
Why does he have to win ??
Whats at stake ??
Why is he breaking multimillion dollar contracts ??
What is the protagonists weakness ??
What obstacles stand in the way of the protagonist ??
Try to include all the unique factors that make this concept stand out from the crowd..
Happy writing 😀
Tor