Comforting a victim?s family a young discovers a supernatural connection to a number of cold cases and sets out to prove this to a cynical police force.
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A young priest.
Shouldn’t you mention the reason to prove the connection? It should be important to closing the cases, no?
While comforting a victim’s family, a young priest discovers a supernatural connection to a number of cold cases that will will help the police catch a killer.
The young priest ends up having to go it alone against the forces of evil. This is very early in my thought process. May not be a story yet.
What’s the dramatic point of trying to persuade the police?? If the culprit is supernatural, the police are powerless to do anything.? He’s wasting his time (and the audience’s) exploring an option he knows they are powerless to do anything about.
Seems to me the logline should cut to the chase:? he’s got to whatever has to be done, confront the supernatural whatever-it-is himself.
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