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Steve
Posted: April 10, 20122012-04-10T21:43:49+10:00 2012-04-10T21:43:49+10:00In: Public

Having lost everything to the I.R.S., a wealthy and materialistic New York executive couple is forced to start all over again with nothing? in the heart of the Bermuda Triangle!

Submersed in the ?Devil?s Triangle?s? eerie influences, bizarre Voodoo rituals, cultural conflicts and many a web of deceit, their marriage, fortitude and happiness are put to the test in this non-stop, what could possibly happen next(?!) romantic comedy.

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    1. it52
      2012-04-11T02:54:18+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 2:54 am

      When I read your logline, I didn’t get the impression that it was a romantic comedy. Also the Bermuda Triangle idea sounds a little random. Maybe you can imply that they are forced to go to the Bermuda Triangle? Maybe they go on one last vacation and they get sucked into the Bermuda Triangle and they have to find a way out and they both bond again and their relationship starts over. They both rediscover their love for each other.

      It could be a cool horror/suspense/adventure movie but I don’t see it as a comedy right now.

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    2. Paul Clarke Samurai
      2012-04-12T11:31:08+10:00Added an answer on April 12, 2012 at 11:31 am

      Sounds like ‘Fun with Dick and Jane’ set in an exotic location. It’s a fish out of water story two times over. Once, because they’re now poor and not used to that life. And second, because they go from living in New York to the Bermuda Triangle.

      A good setup. But it lacks direction. Maybe just a hint at their goal. Do they wish to get rich again? Do they want to escape Bermuda and return to New York?

      Certainly has potential.

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    3. Ridleyfan
      2012-05-08T16:29:41+10:00Added an answer on May 8, 2012 at 4:29 pm

      I like the premise a lot. Lot’s of potential. However, just a thought — The Bermuda Triangle almost seemed liked an after thought to me — Why of all places after losing their money choose there & not say… Vegas? Many locations/set-ups could provide serious comedy when a materialistic couple loose there spending power & security.

      I am also wondering about maybe going a bit darker and starting in the Triangle? Their credit card fails, unable to purchase the tickets for the flight, etc. Leads to the discovery the accounts are drained?

      “Forced to stay in the Bermuda triangle after the IRS drained their bank accounts, and affluent New York couple must somehow start again”

      Just food for thought.

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