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dpgSingularity
Posted: May 14, 20192019-05-14T07:52:00+10:00 2019-05-14T07:52:00+10:00In: Examples

How a Black police officer infiltrated a Ku Klax Klan chapter with a Jewish partner who eventually became its leader.

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BlacKkKlansman (2018)
Genres: biographical, historical

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2019-05-23T07:34:06+10:00Added an answer on May 23, 2019 at 7:34 am

      Melsher:

      You raise a good point.? I considered presenting it in the present tense.? I opted to use the past tense to underscore that the script is? based upon events (in the past).? To? say, “This really happened folks – it’s not fiction.”

      If it were? a fictional story, then , yes, I would have used the present tense.

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    2. melsher Logliner
      2019-05-23T06:47:10+10:00Added an answer on May 23, 2019 at 6:47 am

      How about putting it in present tense: A black police officer enlists the help of a Jewish cop to infiltrate and? thwart a Ku Klux Klan group.

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2019-05-14T07:56:02+10:00Added an answer on May 14, 2019 at 7:56 am

      Does this logline break the iron-clad rule that a logline should never give away how a story ends?? Does “…who eventually became its leader” constitute a spoiler?

      I would argue that if it does, this is an instance where breaking the iron-clad rule is justified.

      The Prime Operative of a logline is to pitch the script, make logline readers want to read it. I submit that this logline fulfills the Prime Operative by pitching not 1, but 3 story hooks. 1] A Black man infiltrated the KKK. 2] With the help of a Jewish partner. 3] And his partner ends up leading the chapter.

      It’s a case of the truth being stranger than fiction.

      I see the “spoiler” as the 3rd beat topper to the joke the two PO’s played on the KKK.

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