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Imprisoned by a madman a teen must argue her survive twelve times in a game where the loser of each round is murdered
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>>>must argue her survive twelve times
(???) Needs rewording
>>>in a game
What kind of game? ?How does it differ from the “Hunger Games” which is the first association anyone reading the logline is likely to have? ?I sense this is the story hook, but I don’t have a clear idea what the hook is.
Must argue why she shouldn’t be killed. It is a complex game.
There are a group of 12 people locked in a cage. Each round one will die, chosen by the group.. if they can figure out who the traitor is, they all go free.
Told through the eyes of a prisoner.
Good premise for a low budget contained thriller, but the details of the plot seem unclear.
I strongly suggest re wording the logline to describe the plot with more clarity. Perhaps re think your descriptions from a different dramatic point of view specific to the MC?
My try:
After waking up in a cage a teen must win 12 rounds of a deadly game or be killed by the mad man who imprisoned her and the other 11 participants.
Great suggestion. Thanks.