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thedarkhorseSamurai
Posted: May 14, 20192019-05-14T18:03:18+10:00 2019-05-14T18:03:18+10:00In: Thriller

When a British spy falls for a Nazi?s fianc?e, he jeopardises his assignment to thwart the Nazi?s uranium smuggling operation.

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    1. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-05-14T18:06:54+10:00Added an answer on May 14, 2019 at 6:06 pm

      Limited series 8 episodes:

      Series logline:?In 1961, when a British spy falls for a Nazi?s fiancee, he jeopardises his assignment to thwart the Nazi?s uranium smuggling operation. (courtesy of DPG).

      Pilot logline: In 1961, a British spy must return to his old dangerous games to catch a Nazi war criminal hiding on the French Riviera. (courtesy of CKHarper).

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    2. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2019-05-15T09:50:23+10:00Added an answer on May 15, 2019 at 9:50 am

      For a series a logline should describe the universe that many stories are being told in. A limited series is a bit different as it is more like a huge movie with one compelling arc.

      I am not sure if Nazis are still an issue in 61. ?By then we had Eastern and Western Germany. ?So I am not sure that the date works for that reason.

      In 60?s Cold War divide Germany a British spy falls in love with a with a woman putting his mission at risk to stop the last remaining nazis from obtaining Uranium.

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2019-05-15T22:18:48+10:00Added an answer on May 15, 2019 at 10:18 pm

      Agree with Leviathan. on the matter of specifying a date.? ?That may be necessary in a logline for a biographical or historical script.? But for a work of fiction, it is usually better to give a general time period unless the fictional story is embedded in a non-fictional event, such as? D-Day, the fall of Constantinople, the start of the Meiji Restoration.? Which does not appear to be the case with this story.

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    4. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-05-16T07:16:37+10:00Added an answer on May 16, 2019 at 7:16 am

      Yeah I was wondering that. I kept it in there because someone thought it would be a 90-year-old Nazi.

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    5. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-05-16T17:10:18+10:00Added an answer on May 16, 2019 at 5:10 pm

      i’m not sure whether “Nazi” is right. The antagonist is a double agent. An American agent who worked for the Nazis and is simply a pawn. Less a twist and more something slowly revealed to us. I dunno – perhaps for simplicity I should keep “Nazi”.

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    6. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-05-16T17:28:40+10:00Added an answer on May 16, 2019 at 5:28 pm

      Also – I managed to get a request with this logline.

      I also got one with the very earliest one…

      A retired spy living the high life on the French Riviera must confront his dark, shameful past when he is blackmailed into entrapping a Nazi war criminal.

      And this middle one…

      In 1961, a British double agent is blackmailed with his past crimes by a former colleague, and forced to spy on a suspected Nazi war criminal, now an American jet-setter living on the French Riviera.

      And the very oldest (which I began with)…

      A rich playboy with a dark past is summoned back to his old life as a spy – but is soon entangled in a complex web of sex, betrayal and deception.

      I managed a read request on BL with that one (which probably means nothing ha).

      I mean – perhaps one of these would be good for pilot loglines? I dunno.

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