In a modern world full of super humans with special powers and abilities , An ordinary young boy who was born with no power dreams and works hard in order to become a strong super hero.
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In a modern world full of super humans with special powers and abilities , An ordinary young boy who was born with no power dreams and works hard in order to become a strong super hero.
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A replay of “The Incredibles” told from Buddy Pines pov, the frustrated kid who ends up as an anti-hero because he ‘s too normal to ever become an authentic super hero? 🙂
The logline presents a potentially interesting premise that needs to be fleshed out with more details. How does “work hard” translate into a specific game plan to realize his dream? What the specific brand of super hero does he wants to be? ??What super powers does he covet? ?Remember, Buddy Pine’s wanted to become a super hero in the mold of Mr. Incredible.
And is this premise to be played out as a comedy, a parody of the super hero genre — or with a straight face?
How about this try, I added an inciting incident and a more specific goal, yours would be different but the logline principle would still be the same:
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“After he’s mocked by his classmates for not having super powers, a beleaguered Normal set’s on a regimen to mold himself into a hero and defeat the class bully, Kidd Evil.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
Good notes made above.
In order to be as powerful as genuine super heroes, he would have to undergo either genetic changes or develop technology to enhance his abilities. I suggest you specify his inherit abilities that would make this possible, such as a genius with DNA sequencing or a marvel engineer. ?Other wise his efforts seem to lack credibility, and subsequently render him delusional.