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ElliottMaguirePenpusher
Posted: August 14, 20152015-08-14T19:37:13+10:00 2015-08-14T19:37:13+10:00In: Public

In a post-apocalyptic wasteland, an overprotective mother's world is turned upside down when a mysterious stranger arrives at her barricaded farmhouse, with deadly intentions on her naive daughter.

THE BAD PLACE

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    1. Parmigiano Penpusher
      2015-08-15T11:11:51+10:00Added an answer on August 15, 2015 at 11:11 am

      You’ve done a decent enough job of bringing up the key elements and characters. I do have issues with a couple of phrases though, which sort of bring the whole thing down for me. I think that talking about being “overprotective” and having one’s world “turned upside down” loses a bit of it’s meaning once the apocalypse has already happened.

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