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Paul ClarkeSamurai
Posted: April 27, 20172017-04-27T14:16:09+10:00 2017-04-27T14:16:09+10:00In: Family

In a quaint country bay, a leaky dinghy and a fearful speedboat must help a spoilt tender find her superyacht mothership before it embarks on a worldwide voyage.

In a quaint country bay, a leaky dinghy and a fearful speedboat must help a spoilt tender find her superyacht mothership before it embarks on a worldwide voyage.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2017-04-27T14:39:55+10:00Added an answer on April 27, 2017 at 2:39 pm

      I am not sure why the leaky dinghy and fearful speedboat must help a spoiled tender find her superyacht mothership

      What are the stakes if they don’t?
      What will they gain if they do?

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-04-28T01:27:48+10:00Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 1:27 am

      What Richiev said. ?I don’t see why it’s such a big problem. ?If the “spoilt tender” (what does that mean?) misses the departure, can’t she always catch up at the next port?

      And if she can’t, so what? ?Won’t there ?be other opportunities for her to travel the world?

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    3. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-04-28T18:12:56+10:00Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 6:12 pm

      Could the speed boat and dinghy accidentally caused the tender to fall off or get separated from the superyacht? This way, their guilt could drive them to help out.

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