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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: July 31, 20222022-07-31T04:13:28+10:00 2022-07-31T04:13:28+10:00In: Action

In a run-down Las Vegas wax museum, a washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save Sin City from one of history’s worst villains.

Excellent.  That sums it up well.  Thanks.

My idea of the villain is just a single character from history  who feels slighted that he was ignored by history .   Perhaps Tesla who was into some pretty interesting work.   Edison got all the headlines.  All Tesla got was a car named after him.

Or a contemporary of Houdini who was a spiritualist that Houdini made fun of  in his acts.

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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-08-04T15:34:06+10:00Added an answer on August 4, 2022 at 3:34 pm

      Hi Miles,

      I like where you are going with this. However, I think you should use easier words to explain the spacetime continuum. My worry is that not so many people would understand the concept.
      I see something like this for now:
      A (despondent), (washed-up), or (ill-fated) musician takes advantage of a sudden spacetime continuum break and enlists the help of Elvis to save (the planet), (Planet Earth) or (Sin City) from one of history’s (deadliest), (craziest), or (worst) characters (villains), (bandits), or (criminals).

      I hope this helps

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        2022-08-04T15:53:36+10:00Replied to answer on August 4, 2022 at 3:53 pm

        A (despondent), (washed-up), or (ill-fated) musician takes advantage of a sudden spacetime continuum break and enlists Elvis’s help to save (the planet), (Planet Earth) or (Sin City) from one of history’s (deadliest), (craziest), or (worst) characters (villains), (bandits), or (criminals).

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