Penpusher
Posted: 2022-06-22T21:12:35+10:00 In:

In a utopia where all crimes are punishable by death, a teen gets accused of a crime they didn’t commit.

In a utopia where all crimes are punishable by death, a teen gets accused of a crime they didn’t commit.
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    2 Reviews

    1. Penpusher

      Maybe you could add some character description or maybe add more of an ACTION in the longline. But overall really good work Madi!!!!! <3

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    2. Penpusher

      Great longline! I can really see the story come to life!

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