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Posted: 2021-05-06T09:51:18+10:00 In:

In a world where humans and supernatural beings coexist, it’s up to the skilled, fun-loving agents of the Paranormal Police Department to deal with the various paranormal perpetrators who break the law.

This would be for a 30 minute single cam comedy sitcom called Paranormal PD, basically like a Brooklyn Nine Nine meets Supernatural.

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    1. Penpusher

      I love this idea! In addition to Odie’s advice I would add some “silly” adjective to describing the perpetrators as well. Otherwise it’s hard to tell if it’s a comedy or actually a dark show and the “fun-loving” adjective is just out of place.

      Example:
      In a world where humans and supernatural beings coexist, fun-loving agents of the Paranormal Police Department must keeps the streets safe by wrangling in law breaking and often harebrained, other worldly riff raff.

      Hope this is helpful 🙂

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    2. Samurai

      Very cool! Are you following them around like on “Cops”?
      Notice how I turned you into a camera crew 😉, also altered to not use “Paranormal” twice.

      Example:
      In a world where humans and supernatural beings coexist, a camera crew follows fun-loving agents of the Paranormal Police Department while they deal with otherworldly perpetrators.

      Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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