Penpusher
Posted: 2019-04-10T22:28:53+10:00 In:

In an anthropomorphic animal world, a Wild Macaque from a Primitive tribe tries to fit into an 18th century aristocratic society in order to rescue her father from a Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit.

In an anthropomorphic animal world, a Wild Macaque from a Primitive tribe tries to fit into an 18th century aristocratic society in order to rescue her father from a Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit.
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    1. Best Answer
      Uberwriter

      What makes it a comedy?

      You can drop “In an anthropomorphic world..”

      Can be made more urgent than “tries to fit into..” for she must, if she is to save her father.

      It’s an interesting logline. Have you thought of an inciting incident? Like after realizing her father’s still alive..

      Good luck with your logline.

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      What did the Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit do? Did he kidnap the father?

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