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SamanthaPenpusher
Posted: April 10, 20232023-04-10T02:16:09+10:00 2023-04-10T02:16:09+10:00In: SciFi

In Quito, Ecuador, an indigenous singer and dancer with powers to slow down or advance time uses them as a resource to make decisions that always make her happy; as she grows older, what she doesn’t imagine is that she will believe she is losing them, thus changing the whole course of her life.

In Quito, Ecuador, an indigenous singer and dancer with powers to slow down or advance time uses them as a resource to make decisions that always make her happy; as she grows older, what she doesn’t imagine is that she will believe she is losing them, thus changing the whole course of her life.
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    1. xtra3440 Penpusher
      2023-05-08T16:15:37+10:00Added an answer on May 8, 2023 at 4:15 pm

      This is really good! I’d love to read/watch it. I can only think of it benefiting from conciseness. Things like replacing singer and dancer with performer, and replacing the power description with something like “time manipulation powers” and of course rearranging the other words/sentences to fit.

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