In this musical, the world’s of two very different Sixth Form students collide, and together they face the dangers of London’s knife culture, and vicious school bullies in today’s society. Will the love they share save them from their enemies, and ultimately from themselves?

What’s the inciting incident?that triggers?the? dangers they face?

And”face the dangers of London?s knife culture,” is vague, needs fleshing out.? As a result of? what specific dangers they face, what becomes their specific objective goal?? What do they want to accomplish?? What MUST they do?

And (once again), loglines need not/should not end with a question.? The question should be implied in the declarative statements of the objective goal and the antagonist and/or obstacle.