Its Christmas reunion for the decaying rich Moreira family. When the family patriarch, who has Alzheimer, says out of the blue that he has a expensive painting hidden, the family’s moral will be tested to its limits.

>>>the family?s moral will be tested to its limits.

Specifically, tested how? ?The logline sets up an interesting story, but it needs to follow through with a clearer statement of the action that follows as a result of the patriarch’s startling statement. ?I’m guessing that it triggers a search to find it — the objective goal. ?And it should also mention the resulting conflict it creates as the family argue over how to divide the money.

Finally, the logline needs to be tightened up. ?The ideal length to aim for is 25 words. ?You might want to check out the ?”Training” option at the top of the web page for guidelines on how to build a succinct, industry acceptable logline.

The?concept is a fertile field for comedy. ?Best wishes harvesting the laughs.