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Chris_PLogliner
Posted: June 6, 20202020-06-06T05:12:18+10:00 2020-06-06T05:12:18+10:00In: Short Film

Jinn returns home confident he can save his daughter but at the cost of his own sanity. [Short Film] [Fantasy] [Horror?]

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2020-06-06T21:47:52+10:00Added an answer on June 6, 2020 at 9:47 pm

      It would help if you added to your logline what your lead character needs to save his daughter from?

      Is he saving her from drug addiction?

      Is he saving her from a gang that terrorizes the neighborhood?

      Is he saving her from a demonic doll?

      Is he saving her from an abusive relationship?

      Is he saving her from a rogue elf from a different dimension?

      If you say the lead character needs to save his daughter, you should also add what he needs to save her from. Just a word or two.

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    2. Chris_P Logliner
      2020-06-07T14:31:11+10:00Added an answer on June 7, 2020 at 2:31 pm

      OUTDATED LOGLINE: New Post avalable

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