John Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.
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John Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.
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Agreed with DPG.
Also the logline describes two potential antagonists the undead and a gunslinger, but which one will cause the most conflict and to that matter provide the last obstacle in act 3? That’s the only one that should be in the logline.
The logline sets up a situation, a potentially interesting one, but it fails to delineate an objective goal? that indicates? the particular trajectory of?the plot.??To wit, what must?John Dillinger do besides “tangle”?