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CraigDGriffithsUberwriter
Posted: May 31, 20182018-05-31T11:44:22+10:00 2018-05-31T11:44:22+10:00In: SciFi

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A woman must escape a murderous android that is experimenting on humans to try and make them immortal to combat its own loneliness.

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    1. variable Uberwriter
      2018-05-31T14:51:14+10:00Added an answer on May 31, 2018 at 2:51 pm

      Supercool!

      Maybe add in an inciting incident,
      “After waking up in an abandoned factory site…”

      Both the characters have such primitive dramatic needs that I’m blown away…

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    2. TullyArcher Samurai
      2018-06-28T03:25:51+10:00Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 3:25 am

      I like the android character, but you need to tell us more. Why this woman?

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    3. t3xx3r Logliner
      2018-10-12T06:30:40+10:00Added an answer on October 12, 2018 at 6:30 am

      What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas.

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