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Posted: April 10, 20162016-04-10T22:27:28+10:00 2016-04-10T22:27:28+10:00In: Examples

Les has a fantasy to become a famous porn star. When his Dad kicks him out after following him to a gay sauna he runs away to LA, trapped by his own narcissism it?s not long before he resorts to prostitution to feed a growing crystal meth and alcohol addiction but when Les witnesses his ex lover dying of an overdose he starts an unpredictable roller coaster ride to recovery that brings him to a practice of yoga and sends him on a spiritual quest to India and Bali that changes his life forever.

Les has a fantasy to become a famous porn star. When his Dad kicks him out after following him to a gay sauna he runs away to LA, trapped by his own narcissism it?s not long before he resorts to prostitution to feed a growing crystal meth and alcohol addiction but when Les witnesses his ex lover dying of an overdose he starts an unpredictable roller coaster ride to recovery that brings him to a practice of yoga and sends him on a spiritual quest to India and Bali that changes his life forever.
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    1. Dkpough1 Uberwriter
      2016-04-18T11:57:44+10:00Added an answer on April 18, 2016 at 11:57 am

      It is too wordy. The first sentence is probably not even needed. You also are trying to describe too much of the plot. Really just try to cut it down to the inciting incident and what that leads into. So, maybe something like: After being kicked out by his father, a boy resorts to prostitution in order to supply his addictions that leads him to a spiritual road to recovery.
      Or something like that.

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      2016-05-18T08:19:47+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2016 at 8:19 am

      What classic movie is this supposed to be a logline for?

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