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Ben SamplesPenpusher
Posted: March 25, 20172017-03-25T09:09:03+10:00 2017-03-25T09:09:03+10:00In: Drama

Less than a year after being raped by her owner, a 14-year-old slave girl is a reluctant mother to an infant. When given the opportunity to escape, she’s forced to either bond with the child, or abandon it in the desert.

Less than a year after being raped by her owner, a 14-year-old slave girl is a reluctant mother to an infant. When given the opportunity to escape, she’s forced to either bond with the child, or abandon it in the desert.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2017-03-25T10:09:58+10:00Added an answer on March 25, 2017 at 10:09 am

      Why didn’t she leave the baby with the father when she runs away, if she does not want the child? Just curious.

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    2. Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-03-25T11:04:14+10:00Added an answer on March 25, 2017 at 11:04 am

      Given the opportunity to escape? That can be reworked. Less than a year after the rape, would make it a newborn, not a child. I can’t see where a mother has a huge process to bond with an infant less than 3 months old. Either take care of it or don’t. Where is the rest of the story coming from?

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2017-03-25T13:11:24+10:00Added an answer on March 25, 2017 at 1:11 pm

      >>>abandon it in the desert.

      What is the general setting? Where does this take place? When?

      And loglines are not about characters being trapped between the horns of a dilemma, having to make a difficult choice. Loglines are about , the choice made and the action that follows.

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