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Posted: March 18, 20202020-03-18T13:30:53+10:00 2020-03-18T13:30:53+10:00In: Thriller

Many believe the most dreaded words in a hospital are ‘Code Blue, they are wrong. Although serious, they are not even close to those that strike fear in the most hardened hospital administrator: “We are about to exceed ‘Surge Capacity'”.

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      mrliteral Samurai
      2020-03-18T16:31:43+10:00Added an answer on March 18, 2020 at 4:31 pm

      This is not a logline. Protagonist, antagonist, conflict, stakes, in a single sentence 20-30 words. No vague notions. Be specific about who the characters are and what they want/need to do.

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      Mike Pedley Singularity
      2020-03-18T18:53:57+10:00Added an answer on March 18, 2020 at 6:53 pm

      As mrliteral said.

      As an additional note, I had no idea that ‘Code Blue’ are the most dreaded words in a hospital. Why should I know that?

      Surely this is still a situation that does actually occur and, albeit rare, is still planned for and has a protocol to be followed. Without having the elements mrliteral mentioned, it’s very difficult to know what the story actually is here and, more importantly, why is this a story worth telling.

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      Richiev Singularity
      2020-03-19T21:20:09+10:00Added an answer on March 19, 2020 at 9:20 pm

      Who is the lead character?

      What is their goal?

      What is standing in their way?

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