Logliner
Posted: 2019-03-25T01:33:46+10:00 In:

Ms. RAMBO and her female ET drinking buddy rescue PASSENGERS from starving evil ETs and then meets THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (of 1951).

Ms. RAMBO and her female ET drinking buddy rescue PASSENGERS from starving evil ETs and then meets THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (of 1951).
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    1. Logliner

      Your statement:

      ?When nations start nuking each other, a friendly ET disguised as human must prevent World War III or loose the only compatible planet left in the universe?

      My question:? When nations start nuking each other, isn’t that too late for any ET to prevent WW3?

      I think the confusion comes my use of the word “STOP”; I should have used “PREVENT” instead.

      Thanks for your views, much appreciated.

      Steve

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    2. Uberwriter

      Hello Steve. Kindly avoid cross-film references. After reading your synopsis, this is one possible format:

      “When nations start testing their weapons, a friendly ET disguised among humans must prevent World War III with his drinking buddies or loose their only compatible planet”

      I took the humans fighting each other as the inciting incident since that’s what propels your protagonist into action. Everything prior to that is Setup. I took the liberty with a singular protagonist, which your previous version didn’t have.

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