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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: September 12, 20222022-09-12T09:40:30+10:00 2022-09-12T09:40:30+10:00In: Coming of Age

Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian, a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.

Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian, a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.
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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-09-13T17:28:57+10:00Added an answer on September 13, 2022 at 5:28 pm

      Hi meme,

      I cannot see the relation between the two sentences in your logline.
      You wrote:

      Navigating the strained relationship she has with her older sister and sole guardian,

      and

      a teenager joins the improv group at school as a way to conquer her fears.

      The second part of your logline can be an independent logline by itself. Even if it needs more work:
      To conquer her fears, a teenager joins her school’s improv group.
      Use the above logline as a template and re-write if you think this logline serves the purpose.
      But I cannot see the significance of her strained relationship with her sole guardian.
      Can you clarify what do you exactly mean by “Navigating”?

      I hope this helps
      Good Luck

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      • Richiev Singularity
        2022-09-14T13:24:00+10:00Replied to answer on September 14, 2022 at 1:24 pm

        You beat me to it, Ben. I agree, the setup and the solution do not seem to relate to one another.

        I think the logline is missing something, perhaps she is forced to join for some reason.

        “After her school counselor forces her to join the school improv group, a teen with severe social anxiety has until the school talent contest to somehow overcome her fears.”

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